October 24th, 2011

Injuries from being hit on a bike, specifically internal bleeding

Setting: Modern day, metropolitan area

Issue: I have a healthy, athletic male in his mid 20’s who is going to get hit by a drunk driver as he’s coming home on his bicycle. He’ll be picked up pretty quickly and there’s a hospital close, so that’s not an issue. I’d like to produce the most pain and drama for the least amount of current injury or future trauma.

I’m thinking of giving him some mild internal bleeding around the stomach area. From what the internet tells me, if the blood gets into the lining of the stomach it can cause it to harden and he’ll be in a bunch of pain, plus some shock depending on how much blood is lost. It can be picked up by some non evasive stuff (X rays, that sort of thing), but they’ll have to operate to fix it. But once they stop it he’ll okay pretty quickly and won’t have any lasting damage or limitations.

Am I going about this the right way, or is there a better way to get the results I’m looking for?

Search terms: internal bleeding and internal bleeding + symptoms/treatment/ ect, as well as going through the entries in the com here.

Native Americans and Homosexuality

I was wondering if anyone knew the views of the Cherokee and Blackfoot Native American tribes on homosexuality, in the later half of the 19th century (A.K.A. The Wild West)? More specifically, how did the Europeans affect Native American's veiws on the subject at that time? When Homosexuality was discovered, was it abhorred, or was it welcomed?

I know all about the 'Third-Gender' Two-spirits, and I know that is not what I am looking for. Two-spirits were 'Third-Gender' not homosexual. The word Transgender might be used to describe it, but that would not be very correct. I want to know what views the white-man had imposed on their views of outright M/M relationships.

Additionally, could anyone tell me what said tribes views on inter-tribal marriage, for non-political/non-clan joining marriages were?

I've visited these sites:




And while all give plenty of info on Two-spirits, I'm having a lot of trouble finding anything on actual homosexuality.

Enemy Mine

Military hospital life in the colonies early 1800's

My MC is an (admittedly important) Assistant Staff Surgeon out in the Cape of Good Hope in 1817 and I'm finding it horrifically difficult to find out what his day to day routine would be like. I know that he had a fair amount of his time taken up with dealing with diseases such as typhoid as well as looking after the general populous, but I'm looking for more details then that- a day in the life example would probably make me throw up with excitement at this point, though I'd happily settle for an outline that is less rough then 'he tackled cholera in 1819'.

Search terms used: cape colony hospital, cape colony military hospital, hospital 1800 cape colony, surgeon life 1800 colony, (I will concede that I am terrible at googling)


Additionally, just to double check- despite having his doctorate, MC wouldn't be referred to as 'Dr.', would he? It'd just be 'mister'? I know that modern military parlance would dictate that a doctor be called by his rank formally and 'doctor' informally, but would the same fly for a surgeon in this situation? I thought that I knew for definite that he'd be called 'Mr.' having talked to a few people, but every single biography of the fellow I'm writing has referred to him as Doctor.

Thank you!