My character is cleaning his service revolver. It hasn't been cleaned since it was fired months ago. When he finally sits down to clean it and put it in working order, what types of problems will he find? And what could more experienced officers rib him about (other than the fact that a man who depends on his gun really shouldn't leave it in that condition)? I want him mad and embarrassed but not fighting mad or humiliated.
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Cleaning a Gun
My character is cleaning his service revolver. It hasn't been cleaned since it was fired months ago. When he finally sits down to clean it and put it in working order, what types of problems will he find? And what could more experienced officers rib him about (other than the fact that a man who depends on his gun really shouldn't leave it in that condition)? I want him mad and embarrassed but not fighting mad or humiliated.
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